Oh… me. 🙂
I’ve been doing a lot of chopping and changing during my editing which I think is vastly improving the structure of the story.
Part of my pathology is that I love visualisation; so I wrote a little program to help you visualise the first 12 chapters of the story which I have edited so far. The original version is on the left and the revised version is on the right. Each row represents a chapter and each box a scene (regardless of scene word count).
And because you can never have enough visualisation, here is some more – this time colouring each scene by the point of view (each character having their own colour).
You can see that I have reduced the number of point-of-view changes. Next time I procrastinate I’ll do some more 🙂