Who wrote this?

Oh… me. 🙂

I’ve been doing a lot of chopping and changing during my editing which I think is vastly improving the structure of the story.

Part of my pathology is that I love visualisation; so I wrote a little program to help you visualise the first 12 chapters of the story which I have edited so far. The original version is on the left and the revised version is on the right. Each row represents a chapter and each box a scene (regardless of scene word count).

And because you can never have enough visualisation, here is some more – this time colouring each scene by the point of view (each character having their own colour).

You can see that I have reduced the number of point-of-view changes. Next time I procrastinate I’ll do some more 🙂


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