The cutting continues

While editing Vengeance Will Come I have another short passage which for me is a darling; that is to say I like it.

However the text no longer fits the shape of the story as it is being pruned. It therefore must be dispensed. To salve my creative pain, I share the small snippet here:

“All is not lost, we have a fantastic new lead.” Keeshar said as a four-foot prisoner wearing a hood was escorted through the door.

“Please tell me it’s not a child…” Danyel groaned.

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