My highlighted sections (and a few associated thoughts) from Robert Jordan’s Wheel of Time, book 10 – Crossroads Of Twilight. I have pruned these comments quite hard, taking only a few picked from the bunch.
One important aspect of being a writer in my opinion is the skill of observation. (Which is quite funny, because at times I can be very un-observant). It’s looking at an object or person and noticing details. For example: not just that Sally was angry, but how that affected her face and body in minute detail. How it changed the words she used and the way she said them. (And how that could be related to other things or animals etc for similes). It is then those details which help to paint a vivid word-picture, or an interesting and insightful phrase. I can only presume, Jordan must have been watching at least one rain storm as he wrote these lines:
- the only thing truly certain was that none of that mattered a spit in a rainstorm. (Page 25)
- Rain fell by buckets, (Page 92)
- driving the rain like stones from slings (Page 93)
As I’ve said numerous times, I like wisdom written down in a story:
- how the horror of yesterday became merely the uneasiness of today, once you grew accustomed. (Page 61)
- Loyalty to the Crystal Throne is precious above the breath of life, followed closely by knowing when to keep silent. The more who speak of a thing, the more will learn of it who should not.’ (Page 142)
- Cowardice was the sort of rumor that stuck like greasy mud; you never could wash it off completely. (Page 258)
- Hard times uncovered hard talents in the most surprising people. (Page 325
- Truth almost always did come out in the end, but by the end, truth was often so wrapped around with rumors and speculation and absolute lies that most people never did believe it. (Page 393)
The differences between men and women provide endless fodder:
- In his experience, if a woman did not want to hear something, she could ignore it till you yourself started to doubt you had spoken. (Page 89)
- A woman started hissing at him like a kettle, a man with any brains found a way to cool her down fast. (Page 125)
I’m not sure if ‘humorous’ is quite the right word, but this was an interesting device I saw used a couple of times. First, the set up: relate someone or something
[She was like] A motherly farmwife amused by the antics of others in the village. Even some sisters were foolish enough to dismiss her that easily. (Page 394)
And then a few sentences later pay it off, by introducing a twist to the descriptor:
‘And why would we want to allow that?’ Anaiya said finally, in a dangerous voice. ‘We didn’t come all this way to talk to Elaida.’ She was a farmwife with a cleaver hidden behind her back and a mind to use it, now. (Page 395)
And three more lines I liked, for good measure:
- The steps that led to the throne were as delicate as any court dance, and if the dance sometimes came to resemble a tavern brawl, you still had to make your steps with grace and precision in order to gain your goal. (Page 271)
- They were generally accounted a thieving, unlettered lot who only bathed by accident, when they had to wade a stream. (Page 396)
- She was not afraid. She was a skin stuffed to bursting with terror. (Page 495)
And something I started to do part way through book 10 was to highlight interesting words. Being a bit of a logophile, I like interesting words. (Yes, I once highlighted great words in a dictionary). Definitions are from Wordnik.
- pomander – A mixture of aromatic substances enclosed in a bag or box as a protection against odor or infection, formerly worn on one’s person but now usually placed in a dresser drawer or closet.
- ruction – A riotous disturbance; a noisy quarrel.
- voluble – Marked by a ready flow of speech; fluent.
- nimbus -A radiant light that appears usually in the form of a circle or halo about or over the head in the representation of a god, demigod, saint, or sacred person such as a king or an emperor.
- lading – The act of loading.
- inured -To habituate to something undesirable, especially by prolonged subjection; accustom: “Though the food became no more palatable, he soon became sufficiently inured to it” ( John Barth).
- sibilant – Of, characterized by, or producing a hissing sound
- languorous – lacking energy, spirit, liveliness or vitality
- vulpine – Of, resembling, or characteristic of a fox.
- avarice – Immoderate desire for wealth; cupidity.
Unfortunately, my love of words doesn’t help me beat my wife at Scrabble. I still get utterly decimated.